如何以铺陈方式写记叙文

如何以铺陈方式写记叙文

作者：杨俊杰

来源：《初中生(三年级)》2005年第06期

1.写作题目：以“My Hometown”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。 2.写作提示：1.家乡的位置； 2.家乡的基本情况； 3.总结全文 3.解题链接：

●步骤1：找出关键词语——主干词汇

（1）live in (2)in front of (3)like doing sth.(enjoy doing sth.) (4)all the time(5)be friendly (6)something to eat (7)welcome to... ●步骤2：确定基本句型——主干句 （1）We live in a small village. (2)There is a river in front of the village. (3)We all like reading books. (4)The people there are very friendly. (5)They will give you something nice to eat. (6)Welcome to my hometown! ●步骤3：以主干句为基础连句成文 例文：

My Hometown

I live in a small village. It’s a very beautiful place. There are a lot of trees in and out of the

village. There is a small river in front of the village. The water is very clean. In summer，children like

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swimming in it. I often wash clothes and vegetables there.There are many birds in the trees. They are singing and flying all the time.I like them and often give them some food.The people in my hometown are very friendly. They will be warmly welcomed you go there. That’s my hometown. Welcome to my hometown! 4.点拨解题：

（1）以铺陈的方式直接说明我的家乡的地理位置、风景人物等。“There be”是这类文章常用的一个句型。另外，要注意常见词组的混用，如：“in front of”和“in the front of”，“on the tree”和“in the tree”，“in the same”和“all the same”等。

（2）“百闻不如一见”。作者欢迎人们去他的家乡作客，从而使文章的人情味更浓。