2022河南(洛阳市)高考英语书面表达选练(2)及参考范文

基础写作1---2题型探究

探究点一 难句的表达

下面我们来谈论一下基础写作的解题方法。基础写作的难点是难句的表达。每一道题目的中文内容都有一

些与英文表达稍有差异甚至大相径庭的表达形式。

【举例说明】假设你是李华， 请依据你校美化校内的规划， 用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封信，介绍该规划。信的主要内容如下：

【写作要求】

1．应包含所给出的全部信息， 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总句数； 2．必需使用5个句子组成连贯的短文。 Dear Peter，

I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. . Welcome to our school if you have any chance.

Yours， Li Hua

【同学样本】 Dear Peter，

I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.①In order to make our school beautiful and

clean the air, we plan to have more trees in our school now.②In order to get good places to study and live, we have

many plans.③First, we plan to build a botanical garden and let students visit and use.④Second, we plan to build up a

small garden for people to rest and study.⑤At last, we plan to build some statues of famous people to effect

students and teachers.

Welcome to our school if you have any chance. Yours， Li Hua

【评论点拨】 我们来看看同学的样本有什么地方可以改进：

第①句：“In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air ”比较生硬， to make our school beautiful应当改为to make our school more beautiful；“we plan to have more trees in our school now”中的have改为plant会好些。

第②句：没有涉及表格内的内容， 是个废句， 而且还霸占了后面的信息的位置。

第③句：“First, we plan to build a botanical garden and let students visit and use.”中的画线部分没有表达出“供同学们参观、实践”的意思。

第④句：“Second, we plan to build up a small garden for people to rest and study.”中应删掉up, study后应当加上

in。不过改为“Second, we plan to build a small garden in which we can take a rest and do some reading.”会好些。

第⑤句：“At last, we plan to build some statues of famous people to effect students and teachers.”中的effect应当改为encourage。

另外，这篇文章的主语全部都是we, 虽然可以最大限度地削减英语表达方面的错误， 但是比较单调， 可能影响高分。不过， 我们只要变换句式， 例如改为被动语态等， 就可以达到很好的效果。

【参考范文】 Dear Peter，

I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in. According to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flowers and grass in and around our school.A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in. Besides, we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest. What’s more, some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder.

Welcome to our school if you have any chance. Yours， Li Hua

【注】 由于主语机敏变动， 使文章读起来摆脱了呆板， 行文有了生气。

探究点二 句子的质量

我们经常说某个句子地道， 就是由于这个句子体现了英语民族的思维方式。在基础写作中，要经常使用这种地道的句子。 【举例说明】 比较以下句子：

1．Clinton had wanted to collect a heavy tax on the middle class. 修改后：A heavy tax on the middle class was Clinton’s idea.

2．The people who listen to the radio have a habit of getting up early, but those who watch TV usually go to bed late. 修改后：Radio listeners are early birds, but TV viewers are usually night owls.

3．After the American farmers used the industrial methods into agriculture, they made great progress in agriculture. 修改后： The use of industrial methods was the reason for America’s great progress in agriculture. 【评论点拨】

第1句首先呈现信息的焦点“向中产阶级征收重税”， 然后才说“这是克林顿想干的事情”。句子的was就是“曾经”的意思。

第2句运用构词法与修辞手法。the people who listen to the radio被复合词radio listeners所代替， those who watch TV被复合词TV viewers所代替， 干脆利落。have a habit of getting up early读起来有点呆板， 使用修辞手法把早起的人比方为early birds, 又把晚睡的人比方为night owls, 这样读起来就会饶好玩味。

第3句运用名词化的技术。所谓名词化， 就是把英文的动词改为名词， 通过其他词来指示名词之间的关系。the American farmers used the industrial methods into agriculture...是一个句子， 修改后变为名词短语 the use of industrial methods。句子they made great progress in agriculture变为名词短语America’s great progress in agriculture。前一个名词短语是缘由， 后一个名词短语是结果， 中间用名词reason就说明白两个名词短语之间的关系。

【2022高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）

假如你是李华，是高三某班班长。为了丰富同学们的课外生活，班级预备成立一个自行车俱乐部(cycling club)。请你依据下面的提示，用英语写一则口头通知。通知如下：

1.每周训练一次，由体育老师辅导，支配在每周三下午第三节的课外活动时间； 2.留意事项：器材自备；活动免费。 3. 到班长那里报名。

留意：1. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 2. 词数100 左右。 【参考范文】One possible version:

Attention, please, everyone. Ever since we entered Senior 3, we’ve burdened ourselves with a lot of work. To

make ourselves enjoy a colorful life out of our daily study, we’ve decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities.

We plan to offer basic training once a week, which will be instructed by our PE teacher. It will fall on the third period in the afternoon, when students are having after-class activities.

It is desired that you take time to join our club, as it is a great way to keep fit and a good chance to relax ourselves. What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge, but you should bring your bicycle along.

Those who have interest can go to the monitor and sign up. That’s all. Thank you.

【2022高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）

随着社会对“富二代”各方面负面新闻不断的报道。最近你校同学就“金钱是否能带来幸福” 这一话题

进行了一场激烈的辩论，辩论的结果如下表所示：

正方 反方

1．钱格外重要，生活离不开钱； 1．金钱不是万能的； 2．钱可以挂念我们解决很多问题 2. 金钱买不到幸福和健康； 3．钱使我们的生活更舒适。

3．过分在乎金钱就会失去人生的意义

请依据以上素材为某英语报刊写一篇英语稿件，介绍这次辩论的内容，并谈谈我们应当如何看待金钱。 留意：1.词数 100 左右

2.开头已给出，但不计入总词数；

3.不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以行文连贯。

Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us

happiness.___________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】书面表达

Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. Different students have different opinions.

Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition , it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life. Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.

Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.

【2022高考训练题】书面表达 (满分25分)

目前,学校存在少数同学考试作弊现象,某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中同学征文,标题是“My Opinion on

Cheating in Examinations”.请依据下列提示用英语写一篇短文稿. 要点如下:

主要缘由：考试偏多,偏难; 不用功,懒散; 取悦父母,老师; 个人看法：作弊不对,违反校规; 要诚恳努力学习;......（其他看法）

留意：1.包括全部要点,可适当发挥. 2.标题和开头已写好,不计入总词数 3.词数 100 左右 【参考范文】书面表达 (满分25分) My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.

On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.