中考英语书面表达专题

宝典一 中考书面表达综述

1.

中考书面表达答题秘籍步骤1: 认真审题。内容包括：

a) 文字信息

b) 表格、图标信息

: 巧妙构思。利用列提纲确定人称、时态、每一个要点。

步骤3: 信息转换

a) 以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。

b) 连词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。

c) 连句成文：正确使用表逻辑关系的连接词，使文章前后连贯，结构紧凑，

过度自然。

步骤4: 检查修改。重点检查单词拼写、大小写、标点符号等。

5: 规范抄写。保持卷面整洁。如书写较差，以致影响阅读，分数将降低

一个档次。2. 作文分析

例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动，同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80个左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

过去的表现现在的表现

经常与别人吵架乱扔垃圾沉溺于电脑游戏

与别人相处融洽爱护环境积极参加各种活动

参考作文对比，注意划线部分。

三类一般作文We are very glad that Li huahas made great progress. Beforethe activity, he often quarreledwith other students, and never saidsorry to others. He always threw一类优秀作文We are very glad that Li Huahas made great progress. But heused to be impolite and even oftenquarreled with others. He threwlitter about and made ourtrash in the classroom. Sometimes,he played computer games for avery long time. But now, he canmake good friends with others.Also, he is very active in takingpart in a lot of activities, such asplaying basketball, visiting themuseums, go swimming…... Weall like him very much.

classroom dirty. After class, heusually lost himself in playingcomputer games. After thisactivity, Li Hua has changed a lot.He gets on well with others and isready to help them. He also takesgood care of the environment. Hetakes an active part in all kinds ofactivities, too. We are all glad ofhis progress.河南中考英语作文的评分标准：

第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。13-15分。

第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。9-12分。

第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多的错误。4-8分。

第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词语。0-3分。。

满分作文

根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给

英语提示词语供选用。

目前洋快餐在中国非常流行，许多中学生都很喜欢。洋快餐餐厅不仅拥有较好的环境，而且能够提供方便快捷的服务。但是……请结合你自己的经历，谈谈你对洋快餐的看法。 提示词语：

foreign fast food, popular, like, clean, service, fast andconvenient （方便的）, too much

答案

Foreign fast food is so popular in China that many students like eating it.They like eating in fast food restaurants because most of them are clean andthe service is fast and convenient. But fast food has too much salt, sugar andfat, and eating it too much is bad for people’s health.

Although the fast food is not very healthy to us, I like it because it is quitedifferent from Chinese food and it tastes good. When we hold a party, weusually choose eating there. But I don’t think it’s all right to eat foreign fastfood very often. If we eat it only once a month, we needn’t worry aboutanything.

满分作文

快餐在中国很流行，但快餐对人体却没什么好处。请根据下面中文提示，以“Fast Food”

为题，写一篇80词左右得英语短文。

提示：（1）快餐十分流行，尤其是儿童很喜欢；

（2）快餐受欢迎的原因：方便(convenient)、省时；既可在快餐店吃可以带家吃；

（3）从营养角度讲快餐食品不利于健康；

（4）建议：如时间来不及可吃快餐，但儿童应尽量少吃。要求：句子通顺，语言表达正确，可适当增加细节使内容连贯。Fast Food

Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China,especially among children.

There are several reasons for the fast food. First, it is veryconvenient and save time. Second, you can either eat it in therestaurant or take it home. Third, the service is quite good.However, eating fast food too much will do harm to our health. Ithink fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry. It’s goodfor people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.Ⅳ. 必备（背）词句

a) both… and… …和…都…

b) either… or… 不是…就是…/…或…c) not… until… 直到…才…d) make progress 取得进步

e) not only… but also… 不但…而且…f) too… to… 太…以至于不…

满分作文

Saturday February 8th Fine

There was a special football game today. It attracted many people. Thegame was between the Aged Team and the Teenagers Team. The oldestplayer was 91 years old while the youngest was only 9. The game started at8:30 in the morning. The Aged Team won the first half. The score was 3 to 2.But in the second half, they felt a bit tired. The teens were still fully of

energy. The audience cheered for both teams. In the end, the Teenagers Teamwon, and the score was 5 to 4. How wonderful the game was!Ⅲ. 必备（背）词句

a) as soon as… 一… 就 …

b) as + adj. + as possible / as many(much)+可数(不可数)名词+as possible尽可能….的

c) be famous for…… 以…而闻名、著名d) had better (not) do sth. 最好（不）做…

e) It takes sb. some time to do sth. 某人做某事花了多长时间。f) It’s time for sth. / It’s time for sb. to do sth. 是做…的时间了、该做….了

g) prefer to do sth. 宁可、更愿意做… / prefer doing to sth. 更喜欢做…不喜欢做…

h) used to do sth. 过去曾经、常做…（现在不做了）

宝典二：文章的结构

--开头、主体和结尾

中考英语书面表达篇幅要求不长，但是，要求有明确的开头部分，文章主体部分及结尾部分，不能是一篇由十几个句子简单拼凑起来的短文。因此，在写作过程中，要注意以下要点：

Ⅰ. 写作指导1.

“开门见山”式的开头：一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

2. “条理清楚”的主体：理顺要点的先后表达顺序，并将各个单句按照其

逻辑关系进行适当调整。3. “点明主题”的自然结尾：文章的结尾没有固定的模式，可以根据表达

主题的需要灵活创造。一种较为常见的结尾方法，是对一篇文章的中心思想、主要内容进行清晰明朗的总结，甚至是画龙点睛。恰当的总结和归纳往往会使文章增色。

Ⅱ. 满分作文

After three years of staying together, you will say goodbye to yourteachers soon. You must have much to say to your teachers.We want to know:

What you want to say to your English teacher most.Why you want to say so

What you want to tell her about your future plan

要求：1词数：60-80

2. 不要出现真实的人名和校名

敬爱的老师，我想对你说：Dear Mrs. Guo,

I want to say ‘Thank you’ most at the moment when I have to saygoodbye to you.I really appreciate what you have done for me. I used to be too shy tospeak English in front of the class. You found my problem and helped meout. I can still remember your smile on the day when I won the first prize inthe English speech contest. It was you who gave me the confidence.

I have a dream of going to the Beijing University in the future. Thoughit’s hard for me, I’m sure your love will encourage me to achieve. Yours, Tom

Ⅲ. 必备（背）词句

a) try one’s best to do sth. 努力做某事b) not…until… 直到…为止c) in order to do sth. 为了

d) practice doing sth. 练习做某事e) get ready for sth. …做准备f) all kinds of… 各种各样的…g) so… that… 如此…以至于…

h) share sth. with sb. 与某人一起分享…

宝典三：应用文

-书信、电子邮件

应用文是人们在生活、学习、工作和社会活动中经常使用到的，是为解决实际问题、处理具体事务而写的，它要求实用、真实、准确，还要求格式规范。人们阅读应用文时，一般不包含欣赏的因素，只要求文通、字顺、事明即可。所以，应用文要写的简洁明了，事实清楚，对内容、格式作周密具体的考虑和安排，以免因疏漏而贻误事情。

应用文在实践中已形成了各种较为固定的形式。中考经常涉及的英语应用文主要有书信、电子邮件、发言稿、通知等。考生有必要熟悉有关应用文的写作知识，了解有关应用文的写作要求，从而掌握有关应用文的写作诀窍。

I. 书信

1. 写作指导

英文书信一般由以下五部分组成：

（1） 信头（Heading）：即写信人的地址和写信的日期、要写

在信纸的右上角；

（2） 称呼（Salutation）：指对收信人的称呼，写在左上角，

顶格写；称呼后面的标点一般用逗号“，”；

（3） 正文（Body of the letter）: 信件的主体部分。写在称呼的

下一行，一般由左边第三或第五个字母处开始写起；

【注意】近些年来，中考增加了一种较为灵活的书信写作形式，即：写回

信。这类题型中，书信正文的开头除简单的问候（How are you?/How’s everything going?）外，应该总结一下上封来信中提出的问题、需求等，使读者更清楚地了解这封回信的意图。

（4） 结束语（Closing）: 指正文下面的结尾客套语。位置应低

于正文一、二行。一般从信纸的中间稍右写起，第一个字母大写，末尾用逗号。常用的结束语有Yours sincerely,Yours, Sincerely yours, Yours truly等；（5） 署名（Signature）: 写在结束语的下面。

作文赏析：

圣诞节快到了，你收到了一封来自圣诞老人的信。根据来信内容及提示

信息，完成回信

正文部分的开头、主体和结尾。

Dear Tom (Mary),

Not long from now, I'll be leaving the North Pole for my long trip onChristmas. Although it's a long journey, I am still eager to visit you in Beijingsoon.

My elves (精灵) tell me that you have received a high mark in your finalEnglish exam this year, that's excellent! I think you are such a smart boy(girl) for your age. I'm so proud of you!I must go now to check on the busy little elves in the workshop wherethey are making all the toys and gifts for the good boys and girls. Let meknow what present you want for the coming Christmas. We will be loading(装) the sleigh(雪橇) soon and heading your way!I’m looking forward to your message.

Merry Christmas and Warmest Wishes!

Santa Clause

Yours,

Tom (Mary)

2. 满分作文

江苏盐城2005年中考

小明和小华是在“手拉手”活动中结成的一对学习伙伴。前不久，小名来信向小华询问如何学好英语。请你以小华的名义给他写封信。内容包括：

（1） 学习英语的基本方法（listen carefully; speak much;

read widely; learn …by heart; practise writing; …）；（2） 你的体会和其他建议。

词数：80词左右。信的开头与结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m very glad to receive your letter. In your letter you asked me abouthow to learn English. Now I’ll tell you something about it.I think you must listen carefully and be active in class. Speak as much aspossible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You’d better read widely andlearn some important parts by heart. You should practise writing often. Ofcourse there are many other ways. You can also see English movies, learn tosing English songs or make pen-friends with foreigners. They are all very

helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. I’m sure you’ll learnEnglish well.

Yours, Xiao Hua3. 必备（背）词句

(1) It’s very glad(happy) to… 很高兴…

(2) everything goes well/everything is all right 诸事顺利、诸事安好(3) tell sb. about sth. 告诉某人某事(4) I’m afraid… 恐怕…

(5) I’m so sorry(happy) to hear that… 得知...（听到...消息），我很难过(高兴)。

(6) I’m writing to… 此信是为了…

(7) send best regards to sb. 代我问候某人(8) I’m looking forward to sth. 期盼某事

Ⅱ.电子邮件

1. 写作指导

电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成：

（1）收件人地址: 在标题栏的 “收件人（To）”框中输入收信人的E-mail地址。

（2）主题: “主题（Subject）”框的内容应简明地概括新的内容，短的可以是一个

单词，如greeting；长得可以是一个名词性短语，也可以使完整句。

（3）称呼: E-mail一般使用非正式的文体，因此正文前的称呼通常无需

使用诸如Dear

Mr. John 之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名，如：Hi Tom,

但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并使用姓。如：Dear Doctor Li,。（4）正文: 写E-mail和写英文书信相差不多，但要注意以下两点：

a: 首先要明确写给谁。不同的收件人，语气不同。写给朋友的可用一

些俚语或缩写语言，但正式的邮件就不能用俚语或缩写词语。像中考书面表达就是正规的写作，就不能用俚语或缩写词语。

b: 写电子邮件要直接，并多用短剧使意思清楚。对重点部分要作详细

介绍，中考试题要求写电子邮件，就必须根据提示，将要点写全，并注意语言的运用。

（5）信尾客套话: 信尾客套话通常也很简明。常常只需一个词，如：Thanks, Best, Cheers 等； 不需要用一般信函中的Sincerely yours, Bestregards 等。

2. 满分作文

根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。

假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David 的E-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其自述不计入所完成的短文内。）提示词语：Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult,different from, it is important…, listen, talk, read, write

Dear David,

I’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful,and many foreigners are learning it now. It’s difficult for you because it’squite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese wordsas possible. It’s also important to do some reading and writing. You canwatch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best totalk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books butalso from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I’msure you’ll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing

Yours,

Wang Ming

3. 必备（背）词句

(1) receive 收到

(2) give advice 提建议

(3) thank sb. for sth. 感谢某人做了某事(4) invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事

(5) keep(stay) in touch 保持联络

宝典四：应用文的写作

---发言稿、通知

Ⅰ. 发言稿1.写作指导

发言稿是参加会议者为了在会议上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想、工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。格式一般由三部分构成：

(1) 称呼。顶格书写。常用的称呼有Dear Mr./Mrs./Miss.…, DearSir/Madam, Ladies and gentlemen,(2) 正文(3) 结束语

发言稿的写作要注意两点：

(1) 演讲稿最重要的一点是要有吸引力，所以明确演讲的对象很重要，对不同的听众发

言，发言的内容不同。

(2) 发言稿中赞同什么，反对什么，要旗帜鲜明，不能模棱两可。此外在准备演讲稿时，应力求语言通俗易懂，诙谐幽默，生动形象，层次清晰，逻辑性强，句子精悍有力，文字朗朗上口，语言节奏感强。具体来说就是要多运用以下几种手段：

1 多采用单句。 ②语言多口语化。③多用排比句。④重复修辞格多。⑤多采用祈使句。⑥多运用设问句。

2. 满分作文

假设你将代表你校2008届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿内容要点如下：回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助祝愿考生自拟、至少两点注意：1. 词数80左右。 2. 发言稿必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。 3. 不得使用审视人名、校名等相关信息。

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellowgraduates,It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduatingclass of 2008.

It has been threes years for us to study in this beautiful school. Ourteachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We havelearned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without ourteachers’ efforts, our parents’ supports and our classmates’ help. At thismoment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening.

Ⅱ. 通知

1. 写作指导

通知是一种常用应用文体，用来把有关事情告知特定的读者或听众。它分为书面通知和口头通知两种，这两种通知在格式上有较大差别。

书面通知的常见形式有一般、布告、海报等。它们一般张贴在布告栏或黑板上。通知的正文上方有Notice(或全部大写NOTICE)或

Announcement(或全部大写ANNOUNCEMENT)为题目。通知题目要求居中打印、书写，有时为了强调、甚至可以以粗体形式出现。书面通知的正文一般用第三人称来写。时间、地点、参加者、内容、注意事项是通知的要点，应在正文中直截了当地一一予以说明。书面通知一定要有发通知的时间及落款。

口头通知一般不用写题目，也不必有出通知的时间。由于口头通知是面对面的告知事情，所以应该有称呼和开头语，还要用结束语。它的结构比较松散，形式比较灵活，口头语较多。

通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容，因而多用将来时态，其中往往有一些注意事项，一般用祈使句来强调。通知还必须具备三个要素：时间、地点、活动内容，而且这些都得准确无误。

2. 满分作文

天津市2006 中考

请你以学校学生会的身份，写一份有关即将在本校举办2006年英语夏令营的书面通知，内容如下：

时间地点内容

7月29日至8月1日学校礼堂

1．演讲、辩论

2．谈学习英语的经验3．师生英语晚会

要求

4．浏览市容

1．欢迎广大同学踊跃参加夏令营活动2．活动后写一篇日记，谈谈你的感想

注意：

1．词数在80-100个左右。

2．意思连贯、语言通顺、避免逐条翻译。3．开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：做演讲 make a speech (give a lecture) 辩论 have a debate

Dear students,

The English Summer Camp will be held in the school hall from July 29 toAugust 1. Many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in.During the camp, you can give a lecture and have a debate. Besides, thestudents who do well in English study will talk about their experience. Thereis also an English party between teachers and students. In the end, you’ll havea chance to visit the city of Tianjin.

Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it. Don’t forget to tell uswhat you think of the camp in your diary.

Students’ Union June 6, 2006

宝典五: 记叙文的写作

记叙文是以记叙人物的经历或事物的发展变化过程为主的一种文体。中考一般考察两类：一种是以人物为主，围绕人物来组织材料。可以以任务为中心叙述一件或几件事。二是以时间为中心，围绕事件组织材料，可以以事件为中心写一个人，也可以写几个人。近几年的中考书面表达中，记叙文是主流体裁。因此一定要加强这方面的练习。下面我们就分别看看怎样描述身边的人和事。

I. 写人

1. 写作指导

人物描写的方法有肖像描写、言语描写、行为描写、心理描写等。人物的肖像主要指人物的外貌，包括人物的容貌、服饰、姿态和神情等。肖像描写既可以写人物的静态，也可以写人物的动态。通常只是选取个人外表上最鲜明的部分进行特写，比如写眼睛。人物的语言要有个性，能表现人物的出身、教养、经历和性格，让人读了闻其声如见其人。人物的行动要符合生活的本质，符合人物性格发展的逻辑；可以选择具体的、富有特征的行动来显示人物的性格和心理活动。心理描写就是要充分揭示出人物内心的喜、怒、哀、乐等。

2．满分作文

每个人都有自己喜欢的老师和同学，你们班将以«My Favorite Teacher/Classmate»为题，举行英语主题班会，请你写一篇英语班会的发言稿。 注意：

1. 从所给的两个题目中任选一个。

2. 短文必须包括题目要求要点，使用表格中的词语，适当发挥。

3. 词数：不少于60。

4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。PersonMy Favorite TeacherMy Favorite ClassmateAppearancetall/shorttall/short, …Personalitypatient, …friendly, …Reasonlove teaching,hardworking,

give interesting lessons,active in class,talk with me, …spend (time), …

（A） （B）

My Favorite Teacher My Favorite Classmate

(A) My Favorite Teacher

Miss Li is my Favorite teacher. She is neither tall nor short. She is notonly patient but also helpful. Do you know why I love her so much? I loveher because she loves teaching and treats us as her friends. And her class is solively and interesting that we can enjoy ourselves in her class. Although sheis busy, she always finds time talking with us. We are proud of being herstudent.

(B) My Favorite Classmate

I have a good classmate called Sally. She is good looking and short. Sheis a hardworking girl. She is never late for school. In class she always listenscarefully. She is active in class and does her homework carefully after class.

She is good at English. So she spends a lot of time helping me with m yEnglish. She is very friendly to others. Whenever you are in trouble, shealways helps you. So everyone in our class likes her.

Ⅱ叙事

1. 写作指导

叙事类记叙文主要由时间（when）、地点(where)、人物(who)、原因(why)、经过(how)和结果(what)六大要素构成。 写叙事记叙文的注意事项：

（1） 结构要完整。事件的前因后果，来龙去脉要讲清楚；文

章的标题和内容要一致；文章的结尾与开头要呼应。（2） 人称要清楚。写记叙文可用“你、我、他”三种人称。叙

事时应根据需要转换人称，但不能引起混乱，让读者分不清谁是谁。

（3） 线索要连贯。线索是把文章的全部材料串连成一个有机

整体的纽带。时间、人物和事件都可以成为线索，但必须前后连贯，不能割裂开来。

（4） 构思要新颖。构思新颖就是文章的立意要新颖，组织材

料和表达思想内容的手法要巧妙，与众不同。这样才能引起读者的兴趣，使读者爱不释手。

总之，写叙事记叙文总的要求是一要清楚，二要生动。能做到这两点，聚能写出一篇出色的叙事作文。

2．满分作文

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩（Lin Hao）救了两名同学，然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。

请你就林浩同学的事迹，以“Learn from the Hero”为题，给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你要向他学习什么。

提示词语：a student, nine years old, happen, save, walk, to safety, bedeeply moved, brave, give up

Learn from the Hero

Lin Hao is a student. He is only nine years old. After WenchuanEarthquake happened, he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked forseven hours to safety.

I was deeply moved by his story. I think he is a brave boy. He did his bestwhen he faced great danger. I should learn from him. I will think of othersfirst and help then as much as possible. I will never give up when I face anydifficulties.

宝典六：说明文

说明文是用来说明事物，阐明事理的一种文体。说明文具有科学性和客观性两大特点。说明文的主要时态为现在时，涉及其它时态时要根据内容、情景作出准确选择。Ⅰ. 写作指导

1. 抓住事物的特征。说明文要有明确的目的性，文章内容应紧紧围绕事物、现象的规律性特征而展开，这样才能将事物的形状、性质、成因、功能和意义等交代清楚。

2. 合理安排说明顺序。对不同的对象采用不同的说明顺序安排：

时间顺序：讲述事物的发展过程。按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。

空间顺序：说明事物外形或特征。空间顺序包括：远近、内外、高低、上下、前后、左右、整体、局部等。

逻辑顺序：说明一个事理。多按事理内在的逻辑关系来安排内容：从现象到本质、

从原因到结果、从主要到次要、从概括到具体、从

特点到用途等。

3. 选择恰当的说明方法。根据说明对象特性，合理选择说明方法。说明文常见方法有：

罗列法：适用于各类指导性的说明文。在文章开始时提出需要说明的东西和观点，

之后常用first, second,…and finally加以罗列说明。定义法：对具体事物概念进行说明。其基本要素是定义句，常见模式是：

被定义对象+is+所属类别+性定语。

举例法：通过具体例子表达主题。常用for example, forinstance, another example

is…等关联词（组）。

比较法：对两个对象进行比较时使用。可以比较相同点，也可以比较不同点。比

较相同时，常用similarly, also, too, in the same case…；

比较不同时，常

用however, but, on the other hand, in contrast…

4. 使用准确周密的语言。

准确，以保证其科学性；

简明扼要，避免夸张的辞藻；

客观表述，避免主观色彩。采用被动语态是客观表述事物的常用手法。Ⅱ. 满分作文

根据以下有关Alan Brown个人情况的介绍，以Alan Brown为题，写一篇介绍他的短文。

要求：（1）运用第三人称；

（2）所给信息必须全部使用； （3）语句通顺连贯；

（4）可以适当扩展；（5）不少于60词。

Name:Alan BrownAge:16

69 Park

Address:

Sydney

Nationality(国籍):AustralianOccupation(职业):studentFavorite subjects:art, music

Weekdayswimming

Road,

and

activities:walkingUsual Saturday

having parties

activity:Usual Sunday

watching TV

activity:

Alan Brown

Alan Brown is a 16-year-old boy. He is an Australian high schoolstudent. He lives at 69 Park Road, Sydney. Art and music are hisfavorite subjects.He loves studying and sports. He usually goes swimming three orfour times every week. And he often walks after supper every day.Cool water and clean air always makes him happy. Australianstudents are different from our Chinese students. On Saturdays, heusually has parties with his friends and they always enjoy themselves.On Sunday, he usually stays at home and watches TV.Ⅲ. 必备（背）词句

常用关联词总结（一）：表先后顺序的关联词（组）

1. first of all / at first / firstly 首先

2. secondly / then / next 其次、然后、之后

3. in the end / finally / eventually / at last终于、最终、最后4. last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的说明文常用表达句式

1. 地点介绍

… in the (north) of … 在… 的北部There be… 有...

lie / be located /be situated (in/on/at a place) 位于…2. 事物说明

sth is … meters long, …meters wide. 什么东西…长, …宽be made of… 由…做成

这是由金属和塑料制成的。

3. 表述方式、方法的说明文

be easy to do sth. 做…很容易

First……, Next……, Then……, Finally……

首先，… 接下来，… 然后，… 最后…

There is more than one way to do sth… 做… 的方法不止一个

Please do as the follows：

… times a day (week, month…) 每天（周、月…）多少次4. 事理说明

to play an important role in sth. 在…方面起着重要的作用The reason is that (it can do sth.) … 理由是…

宝典七：议论文

议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文有三要素，即论点、论据和论证。近年来，议论文或夹叙夹议的文体形式在书面表达考核中频频出现，此类作文多为开放（半开放）式作文。写作时应注意：

1. 观点正确、鲜明、认真、概括；2. 论据真实、可靠、充分、典型；3. 推理符合逻辑。Ⅰ. 写作指导：

1. 议论文结构：英文议论文的结构一般比较固定，通常包括以下三部分：

引言部分：提出需要议论的议题---提出问题；正文部分：对所提出的问题进行讨论---分析问题；

结论部分：对讨论进行归纳总结并酌情提出合理建议---解决问题。

1. 中考常见的议论文题型：

1. 评论型议论文 通常，这类作文只是客观分析与评论某一事物的正反两方面，或

在某一问题上反映出两种不同的看法，所涉及的话题很难绝对地说出好或不好，例如：课外补习是否有益？对青少年上网的看法等。

2. 批驳/支持/型议论文 这类命题主要是针对某一观点、现象进

行批驳或支持。写作

时必须明确表明自己的观点：

a) 反对这种观点、鄙视这种现象、抵制这种做法；b) 赞同这种观点、推崇这种现象、支持这种做法。

3. 分析原因型议论文 这种题型要求考生对导致某种社会现象或问题的原因进行阐述。

2. 议论文的语言特点：

较多使用表达委婉语气的词语和句子，有助于使读者接受自己的观点。

使用有辩论、推理的连接词和过渡词，以便增强文章的条理性和逻辑性。Ⅱ. 满分作文

你从报上得知为了防止非典病毒传播，有些省市采取措施，对随地吐痰的人处以重罚。请你就此事用英文给某报纸的编辑写一封信，简要谈谈你的看法。信的开头及结尾署名已给出，不要再另行署名。词数为 50— 60 （不包括已给出的部分）。信的内容

要点如下：

　　1. 随地吐痰的危害性（如传播疾病，有害健康，污染环境等）；　　2. 你对改变随地吐痰这一陋习的建议（如加强教育，处以罚款等）；

　　3. 你对改善环境的期望（如希望人人都关心爱护环境，使城市更加美丽等）。

提示词语：spread v. & n. 传播，do harm to …… / be harmful to ……对……有害，

educate v. 教育，protect the environment 保护环境

Dear editor，

　　I am a middle school student. I’ve just read some articles on spittingproblem in newspapers. They say that in order to prevent the spread of SARSvirus（防治非典病毒的传播）some local governments have made adecision：if someone spits in a public place，he or she will be fined heavily（从重罚款）. I quite agree with this decision.　　Yours sincerely，

　　Wang Nan

Dear editor，

　　I am a middle school student. I’ve just read some articles on spittingproblem in newspapers. They say that in order to prevent the spread of SARSvirus （防治非典病毒的传播）some local governments have made adecision：if someone spits in a public place，he or she will be fined heavily（从重罚款）. I quite agree with this decision.

　　It’s a bad habit to spit on the ground. It carries and spreads diseases，pollutes our environment and does harm to our health. It is very important toprotect the environment. We should educate the public to change their badhabits and punish those who spit in public places. If all the people care about（take care of / protect）the environment，our city will become morebeautiful.Yours sincerely，　　Wang NanⅢ. 必备（背）词句

常用关联词总结（二）：表因果关系的关联词（组）

1. because / because of 因为、由于

2. the reason is that… 理由/原因是… 、因为…3. so that 以致、以便4. therefore 因此

5. as a result / as a result of… 结果、因此6. in consequence / consequently 所以、因此议论文常用表达句式

1. 表述观点

I think…/I believe… 我认为…

As far as I’m concerned… 就…而言

As we all know, …正如我们所了解的，…In my opinion, … 依我之见，…

2. 表归纳总结

all in all 表示\"总的来说\"，\"总而言之\"in short / in a word 简而言之

in conclusion / in summery 总之、最后

宝典八：图画、图表作文

图画作文是以图画来提供目的、人物、时间、地点、内容等情景，要求学生借助图画，通过联想，将一组直观的画面内容转换成文字形式，来反映图画所表现的内容。图画作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。

Ⅰ. 写作指导

1. 结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，图画作文在提供图画的同时也附有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点；同时判定短文的类型、特点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

2. 要读懂图的内容。要认真观察图画，弄懂每一个细节，全面、准确地了解图画内容。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动表达出来了。而且要联系自己的实际生活，对图画内容加以分析、综合、归纳，形成观点。3. 揭示图画主旨的文字要简洁。待观察、分析、归纳各步骤完毕，再用简洁的话语将图画的含义清晰地表达出来，以挖掘图画的主旨。

Ⅱ. 满分作文

根据中文提供的情景以及图示信息和英文提示词语，写一篇短文。 今年暑假，你们学校将组织你们前往澳大利亚参加友好交流活动。学校要求你们写一篇有关北京的简介，以便在交流活动期间向外国朋友介绍和宣传北京。

注意：

1. 字数100左右。

2. 所提供的图示信息和英文提示词语必须涉及（可适当发挥）

提示词：capital of China, lie in the north, many places of interest, autumn,

best season, Chinese traditional food, …

Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are lots ofplaces of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and theSummer Palace and so on. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter hereis long and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season in Beijing, for it isneither too cold nor too hot. One of the most famous traditional foods isBeijing (Roast) Duck. The 2008 Olympic Games was held in Beijing. Byhosting the Olympics, we let the world know more about China and Beijing.So, come to Beijing and you’ll enjoy it.

图表作文

图表作文是以文字结合图表作为写作信息提示的一种写作形式。该题型要求考生根据提供的图表和文字提示，用英文完成书面表达任务。

Ⅰ. 写作指导

1. 要认真解读图表，切勿疏漏重要数据信息和细节提示，不必每个细节都涉及，但重要信息必须提到。2. 图表作文一般采用的时态为一般现在时。

3. 图表种类有：表格，曲线图、柱形图和饼形图。这四种图在写作方面的不同特点：

—— 表格可以表示多种事物的相互关系，所以考生要对表格中所给出的大量数字

进行比较分析，从中找出其变化规律。

—— 曲线图常表示事物的变化趋势，考生应认真观察坐标系所显

示的数据信息，

并且密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位。

—— 柱形图用来表示各种事物的变化情况及相互关系，要求考生通过宽度相等的

柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势，因此考生应密切关注坐

标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。

—— 饼形图表示各事物在总体中所占的比例及相互关系，旨在要求考生准确理解

并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握

部分与整体，部分与部分之间的相互关系，这种关系通常是以百分比的数字 形式给出的。

4. 结论性的表达要按部就班地从图表、数据等信息分析、归纳而来，这样才能使语言更有说服力，切忌主观判断，更不能主观臆造，避免“I think/believe…”等类似句式使用。

5. 图表作文的结构通常是三段式：

第一段：分析图表中的数据变化反映出来的问题或趋势，简要概述图表所揭

示的信息；

第二段：分析原因；

第三段：提出解决问题的办法或建议。

Ⅱ. 满分作文

“世界无烟日（Non-smoking Day）”那天，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1. 对调查结果进行描述；

2．表明自己的看法并提出建议；

3．所写内容符合“世界无烟日”的主题； 4．词数在80左右。

提示词: do a survey about…(做一个有关……的调查) 3% of the students (百分之三的学生)never, 90%often, 3%sometimes, 7%

neveroftensometimes

A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of allstudents never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. Inother words, 10% of the students smoke. That’s terrible.As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands ofpeople lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to yourhealth, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigaretteends. It’s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.In all, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.

宝典九: 提示性作文

提示性作文又称情景作文或材料作文，这种题型的特点是文章的信息内容都以提纲要领的形式给出提示。

Ⅰ．写作指导

1. 写作时不必为文章的构思、主题的确定及选材花太多的时间，而要把主要的精力集中在语段结构的组织、语言的表达以及确定文章的开头、结尾和如何发展段落上。

2. 要根据所列提纲开展合理的想象，准确、全面、形象地表达提示内容。

3. 在写作过程中，考生应时刻提醒自己按照提示中给出的信息点去写，但不要逐句翻译信息提示。要用自己熟悉的短语、句型去表达要点。另外要掌握好文章的长度，字数不要过多或过少。

Ⅱ．满分作文

假设格林（Green）先生是你班的一位外籍老师，在他回国前夕，学校将为他举行欢送会。请用英语写一篇欢送辞，内容要点如下：

（1） 格林先生是澳大利亚人，三年前来到我校教英语；

（2） 他与我们相处融洽；

（3） 这些年来，……我们深表感激；

（4） 下星期他将离校回国，祝他一路顺风。

注意：

（1） 第三要点的内容须用3、4句话展开合理想象，作适当发

挥；

（2） 欢送辞须包括所用内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连

贯；

（3） 词数80个左右，欢送辞的开头已给出，不计入总词数。（4） 参考词汇：感激的grateful, 旅程journey

Ladies and gentlemen,

First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green isfrom Australia. He came t teach English in our school three years ago. He’s easy to getalong with, but he’s strict with us. All these years he’s worked hard. He’s tried his best tomake his classes lively and interesting. He’s helped us a lot in our English studies.We’ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to his. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let’s wish him a pleasant journey.

宝典十：（半）开放式作文

开放式作文和半开放式作文不同于其他类型的书面表达，它只给出主题，提供一两句提示。提示语的目的就是启发考生去思考，激发考生去想象，它既指明、限定了写作范围，又鼓励学生去创新。由于考生的思维角度不同，写出来的文章无论是体裁还是内容，都会有所不同。

Ⅰ. 写作指导

1. 分析主题和提供情景，落实开放之处，必须认真分析材料提供的情景，落实已知信息与所求信息。

2. 思考给定材料的特点，确定写作人称、文体、时态和写作特点。应用文因实用项很强，其内容和要求都很具体，一般不属于开放式作文的命题范畴。

例如：练习题一/1中，写作人称应为‘I’。

计划描绘性说明文是本文的写作体裁。显然，文章应说明将参与哪些活动，从而获得暑假乐趣。文章采用一般将来时以时间为顺序的叙述特点3. 运用高级表达方式，提高文章的表达档次。

比较以下两个句子：

a) I like reading books, visiting museums, and playing computergames.

b) I have many interests such as reading books, visiting museums, andplaying computer games.4. 巧妙运用过渡性词汇，提高文章的连贯性、逻辑性和可读性。（参见必备词句）5. 自拟标题。有些（半）开放式作文要求题目自拟，因此拟定标题时，要注意对内容和主题思想的概括，因为一个好的标题会使人眼前一亮，有先声夺人的效果。

Ⅱ．满分作文

完成了今天的考试，紧张劳累得初三生活就宣告结束啦！明天，你会用那种方式放松自己？请以“I’ll be free tomorrow!”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

要求：1. 下面的提示仅供参考。课根据自身实际，自主表达。 2. 逻辑清楚，行文流畅，语句通顺。 3. 文中请勿用真实的人名和校名。

I’ll Be Free Tomorrow

After three years’ study, I’ll be free tomorrow! It is a good chance to planmy free time.For the first few days, I want to relax myself. I will sleep as long as I can.After that I will get up early every day. These years my parents cooked forme, and I will learn to make delicious dinner for them. I will go over mylessons, too. The new life in high school will begin. I will prepare for the newschool life. I believe I will have a wonderful time.

Ⅲ.必备（背）词句

写作常用关联词（组）总结

（一）、表转折关系的关联词（组）

1. after all 毕竟

2. though / even though 虽然, 尽管, 纵然, 即使3. despite / in spite of不管、不顾、虽然、 尽管4. however / but 然而、但是

（二）、表并列关系的关联词（组）

1. also / too也、又

2. as well as / as well 也、又、同样3. both…and…两者都…

（三）、表递进关系的关联词（组）

1. What’s more 另外、而且

2. in addition / additionally 另外、此外

3. on the one hand… on the other hand… 一方面…另一方面…

（四）、表举例的关联词（组）

1. for instance / for example 例如2. such as… / like… 例如…、象这种的…3. as we all know 众所周之

4. in fact / as a matter of fact事实上、实际

宝典十一：体验中考高分写作（一）

Ⅰ.背诵：常用谚语成语.

1. Well begun is half done. 好的开端是成功的一半。2. A good beginning makes a good ending. 善始善终。3. Practice makes perfect. 孰能生巧

4. It is the first step that costs. 万事开头难。

5. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。

6.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。7.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。

8.Where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

9.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。

10.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。11.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。

12.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。

13.More hasty,less speed. 欲速则不达。

14.It's never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。

15.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。

16.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。

17.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。18.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。

19.well begun,half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。20.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。

21.Out of sight,out of mind. 眼不见，心不念。22.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。23.Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。24.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。25.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。

26.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。

28.East or west,home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。

29.It's not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。

30.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。31.The older, the wiser. 姜是老的辣。32.Do as Romans do in Rome. 入乡随俗。

33.An idle youth,a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。34.As the tree,so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

Ⅲ.中考高分作文赏析。

(一)

真题回放

假如你叫李华，你的朋友甜甜将去英国。请你将她的基本情况介绍给你的英国的朋友Rita, 希望她们能成为朋友，并希望Rita能够去机场接她。请根据一下要点给Rita写一封信。 提示:

1.介绍甜甜的年龄，外貌，性格以及爱好。

2.甜甜将去英国的George Spencer School学习一年，并将乘飞机于8月1日下午4点到达伦敦西斯罗机场(Heathrow Airport)。 注意：

1.词数80左右。

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Rita:

How is everything going？I’d like to introduce my best friend, Tian tian,to you.

_________________________________________________________________________

Will you please be kind enough to meet her at the airport? Many thanks.Best wishes.

Yours, Li Hua范文赏析Dear Rita:

How is everything going? I’d like to introduce my best friend, Tian Tian,to you. She is 16 years old. She is a lovely girl with a round face and bigeyes. She is very kind an easy to get along with. She likes reading and music,and she is especially good at playing the piano. Her favorite subjects arephysics and chemistry.

Now she is going to George Spencer School in England to study for oneyear. I hope you can be good friends. She is arriving at Heathrow Airport at 4pm on Aug.1st.

Will you please be kind enough to meet her at the airport? Many thanks. Beat wishes. Yours,

Li Hua

(二)

真题回放（河南2013）

每个人都是独一无二的，都有与众不同之处，人们喜欢你一定会有很 多原因。请以 “Wha t makes me a good friend?”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求：1. 语言表达准确， 短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。

What makes me a good friend?

范文赏析

What makes me a good friend?

I am a boy easy to get alon g with. I never get angryeasily. That’s the most important reason that makes me sopopular.

I’m always ready to help others. Whenever my friendsmeet with trou bl es, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought.

Besides, I’m quite humo rous. I can always tell somejokes or funny stories to ma ke my friends laugh. They saytime spent with me is full of fun.

I’m honest. I ne ver tell lies. So I’m a friend worthtrusting.

(三)

真题回放

假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和来自英国的一位中学生Allen一起讨论个话题：The Ways to Learn English Better。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍老师Mr.Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。

His ideasYour ideas1.reading English newspapers

1….

2.talking with friends in 2….

English

3seeing English films

3….

注意：

1. 开头和结尾部分已写好。

2. 可适当增加谈话话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯。3. 所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己至少三个观点。

4. 词数：70个左右。

Mr. Nuan，

Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better withAllen, a student from

Britain.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Liu Mei范文赏析Mr.Nuan,

Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English betterwith Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are readingEnglish newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimesseeing English films isn’t a bad way.

I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, wherewe can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look foran e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to knowsomething about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well isalso a great help.

Liu Mei

（四）

真题回放（河南2012）

目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史，有人选择读史书来了解历史。你选择的理由是什么?请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。　　选择理由

　　看历史剧 情节有趣、通俗易懂　　读历史书 资料真实、引入深思;

　　你的选择

　　要求：1、语言表达准确;短文连贯通顺;

　　2、短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥; 3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

　　4、词数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总次数。

Many historical plays have been on TV recently.Some people likewatching historical TV plays to know about history.They think they areinteresting and easy to understand.Both the old and the young will have a lotof fun watching them.　Some other people think another way to learn about history is to readbooks on history.They believe books can tell them the true storied.They canlearn and think a lot from them while reading.　　 I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed andsave me much time.

宝典十二：体验中考高分写作（二）

中考高分作文赏析

(一)

真题回放

一个美国中学生代表团将到你校交流学习，并与近校学生座谈。请根据表格中的内容写一个发言稿，介绍你校开展小组合作学习和自主学习的情况。小组合作学习自主学习* 互相帮助* 制定学习计划* 学会倾听* 合理安排时间* 与他人合作* 思考* 发表个人意见…* 做学习的主人…注意： 1. 词数100左右

2. 可适当发挥，假如自己的观点；

3. 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：study in groups, work together, make good use of time.

范文赏析

Dear friends,

Welcome to our school. I would like to talk about tow ways of study inour school. The first way is to study in groups. When we study in groups, wecan help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to worktogether. Also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. Theother way we like is to study by ourselves. And the most important thing isthat we can be the master of our own study.

Thanks for listening!

(二)

真题回放

请用英语表述如下内容：

1. 本周六是王红的生日。许多同学将去她家参加生日聚会。2. 王红爱好广泛、为人友善；经常帮其父母做家务。3. 一些同学打算想父母要钱，买礼物送给她。4. 你对同学们花钱买礼物一事的看法及理由。要求：

1. 不要逐句翻译。2. 词数60-80。

范文赏析

Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies. She often helps herparents with the housework. It’s her birthday this Saturday. Many classmateswill go to her home for her birthday party. Some of them will ask theirparents for some money to buy her gifts. But I don’t think it’s a good idea,because it’ll cost our parents’ money. I’m going to make her a birthday cardfor her by myself. I’m sure she will like it.

（三）

真题回放（河南2011）

刘伟，无臂钢琴演奏者。他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦想。经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴，他最终在“中国达人秀”（China’s Got Talent）的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上

内容写一篇英语短文。要求：

1． 简要描述刘伟的经历；

2． 谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示；

3． 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. .范文赏析

Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. He losthis arms in anaccident when he was 10, but he didn’t give up his dream ofbeing a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally herealized his dream in \"China’s Got Talent\".

As a student, I’ve learnt a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficultiesin our future life, but we should believe that our dream will come true byworking hard. No matter how hard life is, we won’t fail unless we give up ourhope.

真题回放（河南2010）

请“ is fun”为题写一篇英语短文。

　　要求：1. 先把题目补充完整（空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句）；

　　2.短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；

3.词数80左右。

范文赏析

Cooking is fun

　　Cooking is fun.Why is cooking fun? Here are two reasons.First, it is agood way to show my love to my parents. Both my parents are very busy. Sowhen I come back home early, I’11 cook for them. After they return, we sittogether and enjoy the meal. I can see them smile happily.Second, It is a kindof creation. I always try to cook different dishes. When my new dish ispraised by others, I feel proud.I like cooking. It brings me a lot of fun.真题回放（河南2009）以\"A person I will never forget\"为题，写一篇英语短文。　　要求如下：

　　1.短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等；　　2.短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；　　3.词数80左右。

A person I will never forget

范文赏析The person I'll never forget is my English teacher. He's a tall man withthick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He's kindbut is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what wedon't know. He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words withoutunderstanding, My English has greatly improved with his help.

切记：

1、 审清题意

在动笔之前一定要把试题认真读两遍，明确作文中心思想，判断作文的类型、特点，了解作文重点内容。只有这样才能透彻理解题意，弄清楚试题要求。

2、 找要点，列提纲

所谓要点是指所给材料包含的主要内容，是文章的基本点，要点要全、细、准，既要避免遗漏，也不能牵强附会，无中生有。找出要点后要拟一提纲。拟提纲时，中心要突出，条理要清楚，不要节外生枝。3、 正确翻译句子

句子是文章的基础，写好句子十分重要。写句子时要注意以下几点：

1 句子要正确2 句意要连贯

3 句子要有逻辑性

4 句子要避免过多重复5 句子要避免头重脚轻

6 句子要避免汉语式英语

7 要尽量套用一些已学句型，避免写出没有把握的句子8 写句子时要注意灵活表达，不钻“牛角尖”

9 使用动词时，要注意语态、时态在人称和数上与主语的一致关系；使用名词时，应该注意用单数还是复数，是否要用所有格，是否要用冠词等；使用形容词、副词时，要注意它们在句子中的正确位置以及比较级、最高级的正确用法；使用介词时，应注意前后搭配是否合理；使用复合句时，应注意运用适当的连词。4、 写好段落

中考书面表达题一般一个段落便可表达全部内容。少数作文需分段。段落的展开方式有多种：以实例展开，以定义展开，以时间顺序展开，以空间顺序展开等。5、 做好检查

写完之后不算完，要从以下几个方面认真检查一番：

1 看有无遗漏要点

2 看文体格式是否正确规范

3 看词语使用是否正确，有无语法或用词上的错误

4 看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符合有无遗漏或用错等等。

此外，考生在写作文时，要注意使用必要的过渡词；开头结尾要丰富多彩，增强可读性。再者，一定要书写端正，卷面整洁，给评卷人一个良好的印象，并且要注意平常作文的练习与积累，Practice makesperfect！

附：中考英语作文万能模板

1、 英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分

How nice to hear from you again.

Let me tell you something about activity.

I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.

I’m pleased to hear that you are coming to China for a visit.

I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

结尾部分

With best wishes.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

2、 口头通知常见写作模板称呼语及开场白部分：

Ladies and Gentlemen,may I have your attention,please?I have anannouncement to make.正文部分：

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.

Please listen carefully and we will have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分：

Please come and join in it.

Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.

3、 议论文模板

1、 正反观点式议论文模板导入：

第一段Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should…Our opinion are divided on this topic.正文：

第二段Most of the students are in favour of it.Here are the reasons.First…Second…finally…(正方观点，列出2-3个赞成理由)

第三段However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点)Their reasonsare as follows.In the first place…What’s more…In addition…(列出2-3个反对理由)结论：

第四段Personally speaking,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages,forit will do us more harm than good,so I support it.(个人观点)

2、 A或B类议论文模板导入：

第一段Some people hold theopinion that A is superior to B in manyways.Others,however,argue that B is much better.Personally,I would prefer Abecause I think A has more advantages.正文：

第二段There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that…

Another reason is that…(赞同A的原因)

第三段Of course, B also has advantages to some extent…(列出1-2个B的优势)结论：

第四段But if all these factors are considered,A is much better than B.Fromwhat has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that…(得出结论)

3、 观点论述类议论文模板导入：

第一段：提出一种现象或某种决定作为议论的话题。

As a student,I am strongly in favour of the decision.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)

The reasons for this may be listed as followes.(过渡句，承上启下)正文：

第二段First of all…Secondly…Besides…(列出2-3个赞成或反对的理由)结论：

第三段In conclusion,I believe that…(照应第一段，构成总-分-总结构)4、“How to”类议论文模板导入：

第1段， 提出某种现象或困难作为议论的话题。

正文：

第二段Many ways can help to solve this serious problems,but the followingmay be most effective.First of all…Another way to solve the problem is…Finally…(列出2-3个解决这类问题的方法)结论：

第三段There are not the best but the only two/there measures we cantake.But it should be noted that we should take action to…(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

4、 图表类作文写作模板

The chart gives us an overall picture of the图表主题.The first thing we noticeis that图表最大特点.This means that as(进一步说明).

We can see from the statistics given that图表细节一.After动词-ing细节一中第一个变化，the动词-ed+幅度+时间（紧跟着的变化）.The figures alsotell us that图表细节二.In the column,we can see that accounts for(进一步描述).

Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that（结论）.Thereason for this,as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因).It is high time thatwe(发出倡议).