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我不停地用着橡皮。——稍有素描常识的人都知道，过多用橡皮是素描中的大忌。总之那天我的发挥异常糟糕，我稀里糊涂地交了试卷，垂头丧气地回到家。
I told myself not to (肯定形式tell sb to do sth,否定形式tell sb not to do sth) be nervous when doing the exam, but I couldn’t （注意前后时态一致） do that. My hands were sweating(注意be动词后不能接动词原形). And I kept on using the rubber. Even a person who knew(注意时态) little about sketching（注意学习使用who引导的定语从句，假期里讲过） would know that using rubber too much was (注意前后时态一致) actually a big mistake. In a word,( 注意正确使用词组) I did (动名词不能做谓语) the exam very bad that day, I somehow handed in the exam paper, and I felt very sad(feel 为系动词，后面要接形容词) and returned home.
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